A love is eternal

A love is eternal

A Poem by jadia4708au
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Why love is considered as eternal? Why it has so much impact as internal? Why are we swept away in single stroke? Why can’t it be hidden in thick smoke?

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Why love is considered as eternal?

Why it has so much impact as internal?

Why are we swept away in single stroke?

Why can’t it be hidden in thick smoke?

 

Yes, it is unique and uncontrollable

You think of only one  world and capable

Everything moves on rightly as per your wish

You are the only species in pond as fish

 

Yes, it sends complete joy and makes us to dance

Though  no one may observe it  or glance

It has its own  impact and relevance

It is purely accidental in its presence

 

What one should term it in any form?

No one can afford to remain ill informed

It is just feeling and comes from within

It is uncontrollable when completely filled in

 

World appears completely green in form of leaves

What it retains and what it releases?

No one may offer satisfaactory answer

The real answer may  be lying with only fewer

 

It completely changes life style

You are in the air for a while

You move in cautious manner

Nothing appeals you  any matter

 

It has offered you some way of living

You are led some thing in believing

Love has become assome  source of aspiration

You have devoped deep and relation

 

It is going to be a reality soon

You are dreaming in hot afternoon

The world seems to you as completely fascinating

Something new in form of love is originating

 

Love has to survive and last long

You can’t be deceived or something can go wrong

It can’t prove night mare or end in dream

It is pure insight that will travel like beam

 

 

© 2010 jadia4708au


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Ahmedabad, India



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I am ex-serviceman from indian air force and a hobby writer. i write generally poems on al the subjects. i invite suggestions from all the memers and welcome it. My articles are published underthen.. more..

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