jamie

based on a letter i wrote to an ex-girlfriend...i never did send it off...

dear jamie,

i'm sorry i didn't hug you more

i'm sorry i didn't kiss you more

i'm sorry i didn't love you more

 

dear jamie,

i know how you felt when i looked at that girl

i know how you felt when i kissed that girl

i know how you felt when you caught me with that girl

 

dear jamie,

i'm sorry i left you

but you deserve better

 

dear jamie,

i'm sorry to end it like this

but i must burn this letter -

Reviews

[Vatsayayana]

Wow.
Hmmmm....
Yep. Wow.
While the woman in me feels I should smack you... shame on you for not sending it to your ex, the more practical side of me, agrees. I think we've all been there once or twice in some way shape or another. Quite simply you've conveyed a very base emotion in the most simplest, but truest of terms. I really do like this. Even if you deserve a good smacking... ~grin~ Naughty boy. No cookie for you. But yes, this is base, true and honest. Quite stunning actually. Brava!