random noise

random noise

A Poem by Somebody you've already forgoten

Babies screaming

Little kids crying

Teenagers talking back

Parents swearing

Old people complaning

What has the world come too?

To where we only hear random noise.

 

 

© 2009 Somebody you've already forgoten


Author's Note

Somebody you've already forgoten
not very good i wish it was better. suggestions please

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maybe make it longer...good write

Posted 15 Years Ago
TOTALLY AWESOME AND SO TRUE!!! PURE BRILLIANCE!!! Lol, look at me trying to sound all smartical.

Posted 15 Years Ago
I love it
its good words
and it is good


Posted 15 Years Ago
no Jamie, this is awesome..only suggestion..keep the ending and make it longer..[=

it has a bob dylan feel to it..very nice..I love this.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Somebody you've already forgoten
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I guess I must be Jamie But I just don't know anymore... I love writing and finding quotes here are some for you first up Edgar Allan Poe -I wish I could write as mysterious as a cat -Poetry is t.. more..

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