who?

who is this man?

he sits across from me

staring into my eye

wanting to hold me

who is this man ?

that my body craves

so close to me

yet i know almost nothing

who is this man?

who makes me smile

makes my every worry disappear

makes the world right again

who is this man?

why is he here

what does he want

does he know me

who is this man?

looking at me

looking so calm

and seeming so peaceful

who is this man?

and is he mine

can i keep him

can i trust him

who is this man?

he is mine!

Reviews

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

this is a very good way to show a mixture of emotions, id love to read more stuff like this....

[Shane Brooks]

the piece has nice flow and I like the flow of conscience feel to it sounds excited and confused your desire and hesitation come through as well I'll be intrested in reading more

[turtlegirlluver]

You show the emotions very well in this piece. I can understand the confusion that comes with love, but it confused me a little when you said you didn't know him.
'Makes the world right again'
I love this, it's wonderful when you know someone who has this effect on you. Good job!

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

I wonder who he is. It seems as if the fact that you're unsure about his identity is a scary thought. I felt the emotion in your poem. Good job!