Valentines Day (For Aaron)

I miss you in the summer
I miss you
In the spring,
for every season,
for every waking thing

I miss the sound of your voice,
keeping me up all night,
I wish you were here,
by my side
then I'd be alright

I want you more
each and every day
but im so happy I have you
words cannot even say

I want to feel your touch
just to know
that you are here,
yet your love alone
will get me til next year

I can't offer you a lot,
but maybe this is a start,
happy valentines day baby,
atleast you have my heart.

Reviews

[Gabi Celaya]

Cool effect with the font size decreasing. This might be something that works even better done by hand, if you're good with handwriting. You could make the jumps seem less sudden. If you're really good then you can shiver the writing a little bit at points to make it seem like more of a whimper.
Good work, and keep at it.