A Magical Moment

A Magical Moment

If a magical moment could happen
and the spirits were by my side
you would come for me on a white stallion
and into the heavens we would ride

Twinkling stars in our path would guide us
and the moon would give us a smile
just being so close to you
I would be in paradise for awhile

We could fly through the night to Egypt
embracing in the desert heat
take a tour of the ancient pyramids
and wonder about the secrets they keep

In the morning we would arrive in Kansas
just to smell the sunflowers there
the prairies singing sweet breezes
and the wind would blow through our hair

Then you would take me to the ocean
so that in the water we could wade
we would spend the night there kissing
and our worries and troubles would fade

Our journey leads us into the twilight
rich with gold and purples and blues
our hearts melting into each other
a lavender rhapsody for two

I really do believe in magic
in fairies and Peter Pan
and I would believe in you
if you would only take my hand

Someday this dream will come true
because I truly believe
you are my magical eternal love
just turn around and you’ll find me

jane kelley
© 5/1/14

Reviews

[NoelHC]

All of your work I have read is positive, uplifting, and well written. I admire a writer that can work with rhyme schemes, that is something I cannot do.
I see my friend Maria Rose has visited and and reviewed, I suggested she check your work out, as I know she loves the romantic poems as well.

[jane kelley]

thank you Noel, for asking Maria Rose to read my poems.. that was very sweet.. have you figured out yet what is in the cabin???

[NoelHC]

Maybe I have. Maybe I have not. I shall never tell. Or maybe I haven't had the time to write it. ; )

[jane kelley]

now you're being Canadian... LOL

[NoelHC]

Knowing your previous experiences with obstreperous Canadians, I shall endeavour (note extraneous U required for proper spelling) to return to your good graces forthwith, m'lady. : )

[Saddam]

I really do believe in magic
in fairies and Peter Pan
and I would believe in you
if you would only take my hand.

Definely I end my journey at the bank of Yamuna, Near the TAJMAHAL.
This was a fabulous poetry. Great one my friend, so romantic and have a sweet desire to be one....

[jane kelley]

thank you very much.. I really appreciate you reading it.. and I've really always believed in Peter Pan.. when I was young, I would unfasten the screen on my bedroom window, so if he came to visit, he could get into my room.. :)

[maria ( rose)]

Someday this dream will come true
because I truly believe
you are my magical eternal love
just turn around and you’ll find me.. Jane your words are so beautifully written and so magical
maria rose

[jane kelley]

Again.. I am honored that you like my poetry.. thank you very much!!
jane

[jane kelley]

Maria rose, would you please vote for me in the Tallenge contest? thank you.. here is the link
read moreMaria rose, would you please vote for me in the Tallenge contest? thank you.. here is the link
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[maria ( rose)]

Your welcome and I sure will,,Good Luck!! :)

[maria ( rose)]

just post the link again because it didn't show up...

[jane kelley]

Check out my entry http://tlng.me/1jlINXD and vote for me on Tallenge