No love lost

No love lost

A Poem by jamal

I seek no reason to be a poet, 
my soul is fluent in emotion.
My pen follows it's flow,
each letter lets the novice grow.
Heads or tail ,succeed or fail  
clear statement, I don't care! 
My soul is an artist,as i clean the closet,
it paints each picture,doubtful thoughts,
the silent killer! 
To many i am anonymous,  
yet my poetry is imprinted with confidence 
no love lost is only common sense.

© 2013 jamal


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jamal
Do what you love, love what you do!

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I love the idea of the poet with a soul of an artist who cleans the closet! Everyone carries skeletons in their closets and yet the poet can clean them out through her or his art, perhaps not through outright confession, but through unconditional expression. I know I've shared quite a few things from my closet in my poetry though no one has really called me out on any of it (lol) perhaps for fear of accusing the poet of acting like the poem's narrator, or perhaps because the poetry reflects their own closet monsters. This is a great reflective poem, and never apologize for being who you are... skeletons and all!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love the idea of the poet with a soul of an artist who cleans the closet! Everyone carries skeletons in their closets and yet the poet can clean them out through her or his art, perhaps not through outright confession, but through unconditional expression. I know I've shared quite a few things from my closet in my poetry though no one has really called me out on any of it (lol) perhaps for fear of accusing the poet of acting like the poem's narrator, or perhaps because the poetry reflects their own closet monsters. This is a great reflective poem, and never apologize for being who you are... skeletons and all!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, quick write. Any writer can relate. Well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

12 Years Ago

Thanks i wanted to make it short and sweet and straight to the point :)
true


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Your reason for being a poet is in your write, to express yourself, and you did it quite nicely...poetry is art in 'movemet'.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

12 Years Ago

it's true the reason is in the poem but also i do because it's part of mine like any other bodypart.. read more
I'm a fan this piece> i like the style and content. Very short and speaks volume.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamal

12 Years Ago

Thank you man, im happy you like it and thanks for takeing the time read and review :)

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