Until Now

UNTIL NOW

A song for someone who had stolen my heart for how many years...

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It's been years that I had waited

is it too hard for you to say it, directly

or am I the one who never understands how you feel..?

Many nights I hoped you'll call me

but until now my call log's still empty

what did I do,

I just loved you,

Don't you even care--- my heart will take a BOOM!

Now, now, now!

Just tell me-- how, how, how?

How would I forget you, oh woah!

Shout, shout, shout!

I wish I could let it out

Cause it's only breaking my heart..

... Until now...

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Author's Note

This song was composed by me--- a year ago.

Me on guitars, hymn, and lyrics.

Inspired by?? Hmmm.... this was made on the spot spontaneous writing--- but not a contest. I just want to right. That's all. Hehehe.

Well, actually, it is based on my experience. I just a girl who confessed to a guy--- and that guy never had a response to that. How would I take an 'okay' response for? Hah. I can't still over of him because of this. (sigh)

So? I hope you'll like it! Hahaha.

Reviews

[Reeg]

the poem itself is beautifully written i have to say! The title of the poem itself is pretty great also since it fits the vibe of the poem and doubles as a damn good ending.
This is another one of those poems i cant rate because i rather not compare it to anything else, Its better off in its own place :)
Good job!

[Jayce Em]

Thank you thank you thank you so much for your review! To tell you honestly, some line of this poem tells the truth about my life. that's why maybe it turned out like this? Again, I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[Olando Lucas]

Great poem. Great way to express your emotions. .good job.

[Jayce Em]

thank you! :D

[Misery]

A sad song, but written nicely. Good creation.

[Jayce Em]

thank you for a nice review! :D

[Misery]

You are welcome.