Safety

Safety

A Poem by jayfray
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More break up poetry

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Safety

I felt safe in your arms...
They felt so good around me...
You were this wall that protected me from the world

You were wide shouldered
and strong
and true

I guess you weren't completely true
In fact you were a lie
False security is never a good thing

© 2011 jayfray


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you seem to have a reoccuring theme here. sadness.. its very interesting. good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very saddening, taps deeply into the emotion without overstating anything. Great diction in the end. Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2011
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jayfray
jayfray

Potsdam, NY



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I'm 18. I study english education and theatre and Potsdam. I mainly write poems, scripts, and i dabble in novels, but I lack the inspiration and motivation to actually finish any i attempt to write. I.. more..

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