PRIMAL SCREAM REALITY

a very rough day

PRIMAL SCREAM REALITY

when the walls are mush
and the floors whisper pain
to the touch of my feet
as
exit signs glow
in all the rooms behind my eyes
like crystal shards shattering
and
the expanding reality sucks my blood
as swamp leeches fasten to the eyes of dead soldiers...
then
the primal scream of my soul writhing
is therapy only because the sound is real...

Reviews

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a primal scream to break the silence of the nightmare witnessed in dreams or images... love the description in this piece, Jeannemarie... the pain is visceral and that scream is deafening...

[Bare trees]

I had to read this three times but it is worth it. When all that is left is the sounds than it is the only option to express the pain. This is deep.

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you...sometimes people like me who have been happy and well loved through most of their life have days or see things that rip the heartsoul open to bleed out...