Dream of Her

I had a dream about her last night. The details of it didn't make any sense since none of it was true. Only part of my dream that was accurate was her. Photo credit: Sabina Panayotova

Author's Note

Review if you like. I always appreciate feedback. It means a lot to me, and as always thank you for reading!

Reviews

[GwenLark]

This is so sad, but in beautiful, melancholic way.Well done

[emipoemi]

I quite like the musicality of this one. The imagery and story are strong as well. Two notes: line break the last line at "bed" so the reader is not exactly scrambling across that line. Second, watch out for repetition, you imply three times (once is actually explicitly said) that a certain factor is a lie, and in a poem that short, we readers don't necessarily need to be reminded so constantly that such factors aren't true.

[Peyton Light]

Wonderful writing. Very imaginitive and clear. Quite relatable as well. Definitely one of my favorite poems I have read on this site.