Melancholy Blue Eyes

I brush the hair back from yr face with the soft side of my hand,

I stare into those deep blue pools and try to understand,

How someone so incredible can waste their time with me

and hope you'll never notice how helpless I can be

 

I see how much u love me but I still cant fathom why,

I see it in those blue blue eyes and it nearly makes me cry.

For I know one day that you'll awake and see how its all wrong,

and then you'll up and leave me, you'll say its time yr movin on...

 

Babe I don't want to cling too hard, for the dream I dream is you

But dreams aren't really meant to last, they'll never see me through,

For Ill awaken in the morning my heart filled with raw despair

Despite how much I wanted it, u were never meant to be there.

 

You'll lick yr wounds and mend yr heart and take another chance,

You'll barely pause to take a breath, there is no backwards glance,

And all you'll leave is pieces, damaged goods that once was me

hanging on so  desperately to this love that was never meant to be..

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Excellent write for the torn heart the heartache meant to be if you been dreaming and wake up to find yourself alone advance and go out into real life and connect with someone real And may you find that Dream come true. WIth the Melancholy Blue. Enjoy the read wonderful poetry. Love it.

[Bee C.]

Oh, this is beautiful! So relatable, and also so intense with emotion. Love that is more one-sided is so common and so tragic, but it never ceases to be driving poetic material. Very well done - it's well structured and flows so nicely.

[Hutch]

Wow! what an incredible swirl of emotion! I keep reading it over and over! It's so captivating! i love Australia!

[People Are Amazing]

Oh that is just wonderfully written :)