the final hate

the final hate

A Poem by jeRRy.whaLLey
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B.C. road rage victim http://www.cbc.ca/canada/british-columbia/story/2008/03/13/bc-roadrage.html

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will look for the last reason
to break your face all over the place
will flush with vengeance--

lies
and fears will fiercely be held
in clenched teeth

thereafter the sting of retribution
will come down hard

righteously driven desperate despot
 in a truculent way

                        damn slow pokes
                                get off the road
                         ufucking jerk off !

screeching smokescreen
screaming, shiny
 jagged pieces
dripping red

            HAH--
                the sucker never knew what hit 'em --

© 2008 jeRRy.whaLLey


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visceral, so different from your usual light - as in sunlight - not light in meaning. Truly you could write about a paper bag, and make it profound.
Well done, shocking poetry.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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jeRRy.whaLLey

North Vancouver, Canada



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