[untitled]

Drunk on lust, movement was soft and slow.

Crazy on love, nothings clearm only your touch.

Reviews

[Rae]

Nice.

[Jonathan Ballam]

This is a great poem. I like that fact that you're afraid to keep it short (instead of rambling on which is the trap many writers fall into).

Very creative!
;)

[Ben]

This is very good. I liked it a lot!

[deeps]

Aw this is warm and loving