Selfish Love

This poem I wrote When I was in my high school, Since Ever then I wanted my this poem to be published and put it in public notice

I  was sent to this world for sharing love;

Love which could not be shared and was kept consereved;

This Love which was spelled over me; And was uncontrollable,

Searching my love, side of my mind tending to intimate,

Thousand things driving through my mind making me crazy,

Thinking who would be the one I would be loving my whole life;

Probably she might be lucky enough to hold my love;

As it has never been shared before,So selfish love I have!why?

Why so heartless for others? The world spinning around me!

But never felt like to share anything with them,

Isolation makes me happy and safe from my fear,

Fear of being shattered once for and all;

Thinking again and again;this overwhelming joy;

I cannot explain;I dont have the habit of loving anyone;

But though; I think I am the greatest lover!!

Author's Note

Do ignore My grammar mistakes but do let me know the correction Any new idea is welcomed!!Thanks!

Reviews

[Lunar Lightning]

This is very good, you can tell that it is your thoughts put on paper, though I do recomend adding some kind of.... sense.. to the mix. It would add so much to the piece.

Luna