Perfect Sin

unending thanks and smiles for ms. jenacini

 

constantly invading my privacy

you show up in every thought i have

it's no use

you're permanently in my head

your beauty scarred in my mind

your soul one of a kind

i give up

i give in

you're just my perfect sin

Reviews

[Cynthia Barrick (CHING..]

Cool that perfect sin

[Kelly D. Burris]

short but so precise. No matter how you try to avoid the thoughts, they can so easily overtake.

Very nicely put together, flows well.
Kelly

[Angel's Lady]

This is absolutely perfect! Captures the very essence of that secret, and not so secret, love that we have sometimes. Very beautifully and eloquently written. I like it and I am going to put it in my Favorites.

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Short and stout; but quite a mouthful. Seems like more than a mouthful was on your mind with this one. Nice jot you have here.

[EvesDaughter]

oh, this is great...it has a light
feel to it, like, "oh well, so you
are my perfect sin. I'll deal
with you." smile smile...
lol

I love your writing...I can see
your personality shining thru.

[Kevon]

Short but sweet, i like it