trying to read you

this one's for Brighteyes

 

you're amazingly beautiful and beautifully amazing

and to think, our paths crossed not long ago

entertaining me with jokes and smart remarks

you always leave me with a smile i can't seem to hide...

and open ended thoughts

leaving me to decide

is it all just a game or are there feelings behind he jokes

you keep me wondering

waiting

anticipating

the next moment i'll be graced with your presence

Reviews

[Tara Jean Olson]

i agree with your first reviewer:
"you're amazingly beautiful and beautifully amazing" was the ticket.
you could win any girls heart with this- take it from a girl

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"you're amazingly beautiful and beautifully amazing"
I like this first line the most!
Very heart warming and great feel! Awesome work!

[Angel's Lady]

you always leave me with a smile i can't seem to hide... AND isn't that the most amazing feeling? I love that! Very dynamically written! Very powerful and very beautiful! Great job!