flying free

flying free

A Poem by she makes me weird

 

as she sits in the chair

she listens to the guy

she can't help but wish

that she could just get high

she doesn't take drugs

and she doesn't drink liquor

but everday she keeps geting sicker

she's sad and alone

her true feelings can't be shown

no one will ever know

the pain she feels inside

she will never be seen

because she's always had to hide

she's tired of it all

she won't do it anymore

she's finally learned wings

it's time for her to soar

she's finally high

her thoughts are beyond the sky

she's finally reached the place

because of His mercy and grace

© 2008 she makes me weird


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Cool poem...retrospective thoughts, maybe...thought provoking to say the least! Good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a sad poem. I like though.


she sad and alone ---- she's.
she finally learned wings ---- learned? I don't know what you mean; it doesn't make sense.
her thought are beyond the sky ----- thoughts.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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she makes me weird
she makes me weird

the big one, TX



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I am simply me. I love life for the good and the bad. I write what I feel. So many aspects of life to be unturned and yet a little box to write about me... more..

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