she makes me weird

it's all about Brighteyes in this one

she makes me weird

she makes me funny

she makes the goosebumps rise

and the nerves go wild

she makes me smile big

and laugh so hard there's no sound

all of the world falls at our feet

when she's near...

when she's here and there

and everywhere in between

she makes me weird

she makes me do silly things

she brings out my imagination...

making me seem a little crazy

we sing and "dance"

"i don't see what anyone can see in anyone else...but" her

her ears move when she smiles at me

if i could just help her see

she's so incredible

she makes me happy

i want to be the reason she smiles 

she makes me weird

she says i make her strange

 

Reviews

[emz]

This is really sweet, love definately brings out the childish side of us...

She makes me weird
she says i make her strange

I love these last lines.

[Annebelle Ashire]

In Love There "IS" no reason or rhyme.

It Just "IS".

And We Love It's Power - Good Or Bad - We Adore And Consume The Inevitable Feeling.

[April Child]

she makes me weird
she says i make her strange

Hehe this had me chuckling. It's very true, love does make us lose our reason, temporary insanity it is but what a lovely way to go. Well captured.

[Kelly D. Burris]

Sounds like two peas in a pod to me. Nicely done, flows well. Feels light and full of laughter.
Thanks for sharing.

[Angel's Lady]

Wow. Very nicely written! (Is this about your Angel?) Seductive and sensual in a playful kind of way. Great job!

[Adela Muresan]

This is such a kowel description of the weird effects love has on us :) ! I like it !

Cheers.

A.M.

P.S.: The poem automatically made me think of the song ,,On fire,, by Swichfoot. You might want to download it � I think you won't regret it ^^ .

[wizthom]

yes poetry in motion perfection standing next to perfection,
ain't that peculiar how flowers grow to rain,how love grow to pain,
i love it.pea ce wizthom yes she makes me weird i love it the way u wrote all those lovely things about her,
one in a million yet she is just one

[Egan]

this is a powerful right. It made my heart do flips. Great job with this!