Empty Inside

Empty Inside

A Poem by Jennika has a short attention span :P
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I honestly don't know.

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What am I supposed to do with an empty shell?

You can't possibly expect me to act like everything is swell

Thinking over my life, I realize that nothing is right

No one understands but it's alright

Me, myself, and I; that's all I have with me tonight

Hopefully tomorrow comes by equally bright

No words can describe how I feel

It's like I'm falling through a void but no one's there

My mind is on a frenzy to sort this out

I can't be crazy no way, no how

What are you supposed to do when you're empty inside?

Fill it with warmth or keep it sucked dry?

© 2011 Jennika has a short attention span :P


Author's Note

Jennika has a short attention span :P
I honestly don't know why I wrote this, but I wanted to put something up here since I deleted everything. I felt like I needed to start fresh, and here I is.

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Nicely written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a very meaningful poem. You expressed your emotions and feelings. This makes you get closer to the writer. Nice one! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can understand how you feel. Also, I feel that you have a lot of potential as a writer. Remember, you don't always have to rhyme in poetry. Just try to evoke emotion. This is just my thoughts :)

Keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2011
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Jennika has a short attention span :P
Jennika has a short attention span :P

Boringsville, AR



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