loves mask

loves mask

A Story by Jess smith
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just read and see if you agree

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We take in strangers to show love and compassion. We let them have all they want and all they need. But in return we get a stab in the back. A wound in our hearts and the feeling of usage. We are the outlet of their power and greed. Yes it is good to love but if you love too much you be taken advantage of. The greed of others make us small and weak. We will break down to the ground in sadness. They will build you up and make you feel like you are worth their time or you are important. People help you want love and want to do more with their life. But when they finally see that the people they trust stab them in the back they look up to depression and sadness. But from from my experience this will not get you will not get any where. You will only think bad and harm. But when you find the one that will give their time to bind you up again. But remember … trust no one. Not even yourself sometimes.

© 2016 Jess smith


Author's Note

Jess smith
this one is a bit shorter but here

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Really good short story...So true that some people in life expoit us for all we're worth and and leave us feeling vunerable, sad and lost in the darkness all alone. It reminds of a few friends i used to have but not no more.

I feel that this has been written from the heart and it shows.

An excellent piece of work..So hard hitting yet so true.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jess smith

7 Years Ago

thx you so much i know that for some people this topic can be touch as it is for me so that is y i w.. read more



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Really good short story...So true that some people in life expoit us for all we're worth and and leave us feeling vunerable, sad and lost in the darkness all alone. It reminds of a few friends i used to have but not no more.

I feel that this has been written from the heart and it shows.

An excellent piece of work..So hard hitting yet so true.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jess smith

7 Years Ago

thx you so much i know that for some people this topic can be touch as it is for me so that is y i w.. read more

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Added on October 12, 2016
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