In my dreams

In my dreams

A Poem by jesserose99
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dreams and day

"

In my dreams

I walk my way through the world it seems

I know myself, I know other things

anything is possible

in my dreams


In my day

I sometimes wonder what it is I should say

I question me, I question the way

I wonder what's possible

in my day


One night, I did pass through the sleeping world

my eyes though shut, wide awake

I remembered the questions of the woken girl....and I learned

send love postmarked from you that wont break

© 2015 jesserose99


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Beautiful. Maybe thats why my all time favourite past time is sleeping. None of those pesky awake thoughts and doubts to worry about.
Ps....my second all time favourite past time is napping :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

that's a good past time...I need that with my current sleep deprivation...lol
Interesting poem! I like the comparison between day and dreams and the repetition of the lines "In my day" and "In my dreams." The tone seems gives it an almost dreamlike feel. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!
A lovely poem, loved the flow and thoughts

Posted 8 Years Ago


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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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A Poem by jesserose99