wealthy woman

Wealthy woman

she shares her jewels with others,

her sisters and her brothers

they are not ones of convention,

they are ones of her own invention

Wise woman

alive woman

gives coins caste from her heart

she always gives love a start

Wealthy woman

nothing to show

but the love around her does grow...and grow

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Such a beautiful thought Jesse. No matter what or who we are in life, rich or poor, we all have something to give another. A smile, a kind word, knowing we are in your thoughts..we all have something to give, that to the right person, will mean more than all the wealth in the world, knowing someone took the time to touch our heart.
Beautiful. Now I feel I must at least repay your beautiful words with a psychic juju happy thought, just for you. Hope it finds you :)

[jesserose99]

thank you...I will always take a psychic juju happy thought...those are brilliant!

[alifeacoustic]

Okay, hold on..... AAARRGH, phew. I think that was about 83 of them I sent you there. Depending on wind speed, I think they should be arriving any time n......Oh, sorry. Didn't mean to hit you all at once with them all :)

[jesserose99]

uh oh...ill take it...the barrage!!! ahhh

[alifeacoustic]

Yeah, it's always good to be inundated with good thoughts. Now you know how that bottle of cola feels when it's been shaken before opening :)

[andrew mitchell]

A gem of a write Jesserose, you wear the crown well on your heart!:)

[Happy Chicken]

Love it. A wise and alive woman gives away with open hands even if it's not much.

[jesserose99]

thank you my friend for the lovely review!

[Solar]

In these twelve lines a queenly wisdom - diamonds from the heart!

[jesserose99]

thanks solar, I appreciate your saying so..lovely words

[Solar]

thank you again for making life brighter with your verses

[Rachael Lea]

I love the title. It is perfect. Wealth is not about materials but about what you have been blessed with. I love this. Great job!

[jesserose99]

too right Rachel, thank you for the kind words.

[David Scott]

Wealth comes from many sources indeed. Yet those to emulate have learned the art of giving.
Well thought and delivered! I see you have bountifully blessed with true wealth.

[jesserose99]

well thank you, I do hope so. super kind of you to say!

[-inactive now-]

Wonderful piece, a pleasure to read. Love in abundance is far more wholesome and fulfilling than any amount of material commodity. 100/100 for sure :)

[jesserose99]

thank you Josiah...too kind..who needs money when you are wealthy with love. thanks for the kind review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, this is real wealth...it is the richness of love...

really nicely expressed...
j.

[jesserose99]

thank you Jacob...for your kindness!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I think that's the real wealth you have described in this poem. Wealthy is not just being rich but to share the love really makes one "Wealthy" in real sense. Very nice poem :)

[jesserose99]

thank you, I am so glad you enjoyed it!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I really did, Welcome friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. True wealth is family near and love growing always. Title brought me to and I like the twist of the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jesserose99]

thank you Coyote, love growing like a garden my friend always the best gift. too right!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome.