The Void

just falling

I'm falling through the void

this is the place I get annoyed

because I have to climb out

when my mind flips axis south

Reality is skewed

random thoughts do intrude

little room for doubt

need to find a way out

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

Actually The Void is where everything really is. What Science once called dark matter and labelled it vloid they realize now it is everything that holds up what we think is everything, It would be no wonder that there is much thoughts there.

[NotAboutMe]

The void: Where the stuff that great writing is made of waits to be discovered =)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
sadly i can relate to this........
beautifully done......
loved it!!!
:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no doubt that when our mind is in a void and getting worse, we need to find a way to get out of the doldrums and reverse the axis...

j.

[jesserose99]

you speak true Jacob! thanks for stopping by.

[Country boy183798]

I sometimes wonder what lies beyond the void? What if we keep falling till we're through? Maybe there's a new world where our imagination has not taken us to... not yet at least. But then again, what if it's not falling, it could as well be flying? People tend to mistake the two for one another sometimes, and they make those flying believe that they're falling! I don't know, I'm thinking out loud again.
A very good poem. I read a couple of times and I find it very thought provoking for some reason. So I really like it. Well done, thank you for sharing it, and keep on writing.

[jesserose99]

thank you for your lovely comment

[Robert Parlange]

Hug your dog. Mine always lead me where I needed to go.

[jesserose99]

so true, so true, and it works!

[Bacchus]

This is a fun one-
flipped up-side-down.
I got the turning feeling more than the void feeling from it though.