Summer

I really wanted to write a poem about nature so i decided to write one for summer!

Dear friend do not leaveth me

For I truly begg thee to stay,

You bringeth my soul warmth.

Warmth, that not even my loved ones can provide.

Dear friend do not leaveth me

For I truly begg thee to stay.

You bring joy and beauty to the fields,

Joy  and beauty that no other thing can possibly provide.

Dear friend do not leaveth me

For I truly begg thee to stay.

Stay by my side, where you belong.

For dear summer, you are truly a friend like no other.

Reviews

[Alexander Emberson]

I feel like the winter brings people closer, but that's just me ;)

Nice poem, keep it up!

[The Scholar]

I too am more of a winter person,
but this was so pretty!! It almost, and I say ALMOST, made me wish I was a summer person.
Very good work, my friend.
The only thing I'd say, is that I'm not sure you would say "leavETH" if you are giving a command. But that might just be me, I wasn't around in the days of old English.
Again though, nice work.

[AngMae]

I really like this! It's light hearted and fun. I'm more of a winter person but this made me miss the warm air. I love the imagery embedded into your piece. Great poem!