Urgency

Urgency

A Poem by Jessica Jean

There's an urgency to see you
And an urgency to touch
A silent screaming of my being
Aching for your being so much

There's a certain way I miss you
When you've gone as long as this
It's so desperate, so pathetic
I'm jumping bridges for a kiss

Climbing mountains for your eyes
Slaying beasts to see your smile
Always dying, always trying
Just to see you for a while

And it elevates at night
I become an awful sight
I'm the beast, to say the least
Tearing my soul 'til morning light

© 2013 Jessica Jean


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Lovely rhyming, very gothic feeling ... my favorite line:
"there's a certain way I miss you". Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the natural style of rhyme...doesn't feel forced..


really like "i'm jumping bridges for a kiss"

i remember so many big bridges in NY...as i was a child there...moved when i was nine...

The brooklyn, the george washington..others..

some fond memories for me became blended into the reading of this.

I especially love the third stanza..."climbing mountains for your eyes..."

that is a keeper.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jessica Jean

11 Years Ago

Wow thanks!!
"I'm jumping bridges for a kiss" -Love the energy and honesty of that line. You have a great talent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jessica Jean

11 Years Ago

Thanks!

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Added on January 13, 2013
Last Updated on January 13, 2013
Tags: Urgent, rush, desire, missing someone, miss you, tired, ache, beast, love

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Jessica Jean
Jessica Jean

NY



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I'm 19 from Long Island. Poetry is my muse, my best friend, and where I feel most myself. When I finish a poem, I feel like I've put a shining star down on paper. more..

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