A Flower

A Flower

A Poem by Jessica Jean

I need your mouth
Like it was meant to be on mine
Like our lips were petals from the same flower

Softly kiss me in the night
Softly kiss me in the morning
A rose for a rose of your lips

© 2013 Jessica Jean


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I am in love with the first stanza. I like your simile and the overall tone of the poem. It is very tender and romantic, but it has a sultry undertone. In a way, this piece reminds me a bit of Pablo Neruda's work.

I do think the first stanza is stronger and that you could build a bit more on that or expand the idea a tad more.

I want to live in a garden of your kisses....

That came to me while I was thinking about how you could expand this piece.

I like your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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"a rose for a rose of your lips"

quite a nice line, really brings this fine piece together...

nothing like really good kisses.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jessica Jean

11 Years Ago

Very true :)
Wonderful thought on romance.
I feel a rosy fragrance around.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am in love with the first stanza. I like your simile and the overall tone of the poem. It is very tender and romantic, but it has a sultry undertone. In a way, this piece reminds me a bit of Pablo Neruda's work.

I do think the first stanza is stronger and that you could build a bit more on that or expand the idea a tad more.

I want to live in a garden of your kisses....

That came to me while I was thinking about how you could expand this piece.

I like your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 13, 2013
Last Updated on January 13, 2013
Tags: Kiss, love, lust, flower, rose, petal, lips, mouth

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Jessica Jean
Jessica Jean

NY



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I'm 19 from Long Island. Poetry is my muse, my best friend, and where I feel most myself. When I finish a poem, I feel like I've put a shining star down on paper. more..

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