There once was a boy.

There once was a boy.

A Poem by Lana
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About a boy who broke my heart.

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There once was a boy, who had his heart broken.
He searched for a girl who’s had the same done.
He found that girl.
He found me
He mended my heart
All broken up in pieces
And told me I was pretty
And I was the girl he was looking for.

Months go on, and he slips away.
Months go on and he slips away further
Then there comes a time
When the boy with the broken heart
Broke a heart himself
This heart he broke
Was mine.

© 2008 Lana


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very welll written and i agree it doses flow very good!! ya and i love the message too!!! great write!! love it!! alyssa


Posted 15 Years Ago


i like the way it flows from the tongue...and the relation it has to everyone...every boy has a broken heart and every boy breaks a heart same with every girl...a vicous circle only a lucky few ever get out of. very well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lana
Lana

San Francisco, CA



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My name is Svetlana, I currently live in California. I write poetry and songs but my songs aren't that great. I'll write more later. more..

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