Heart Strings

Holding myself to
End the lost fantasy.
Around you
Reveries are back
Tirelessly.
 
Still my hopes gliding
To near you.
Retouching  broken promises
In my heart.
Nestling chances to
Grip the once
Shattered relationship.

Author's Note

Consider this as a poetry. :P

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, this is poetry. Really nice work with this one. I like it. Rating it 100#

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks.... :D

[Shubham Joshi]

This is a poetry... which is beautiful, written well by you and enjoyed well by me.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you!!! :)

[samanthaashley_]

this is great :) definitely some strong poetry!

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks.... :D

[Ankur Jain]

wow!
now that's nostalgia for you...:)
really sweet work of art Jeyanthi...doesn't have to look hard to detect your feelings...

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks Ankur. :)

[alf]

Hi Jeyanthi. Yes, I do consider this poetry, not just poetry but nostalgic, entreating and emotional poetry.
This was a delight to read, though of a sad nature, and left no doubt of your yearning, alf

[Jeyanthi]

Hi there, thanks for considering it as a poem, Alf. :) I used to write only too many silly things for a long time.