Little did I know Rain

Edited grammatical errors with the help of Alf

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The flares of sunshine
diluted by passing clouds.
Feet are tapping,
Steadily to the downpour
on the road.
The murmurs of wind,
Locking unknown song
In the air.
When everything still and silent,
The wetted windows
Waiting for caresses
of these artistic fingers.

Author's Note

Please tell me if there is any mistakes or errors...

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Jeyanthi. First, the only errors I can see is 'foots', in English one foot, and more than one is feet. So you line would then read 'Feet are tapping'. And the second, is 'of (this) these artistic fingers' or 'this artistic finger'. With those corrections the poem is another beautiful flow of words. I really love this
poem, and is a wonderful description of wet weather, alf

[613]

This is so beautifully written. I could see this framed in my house; no lie. (:

- Brittney

[Jeyanthi]

Then i could be promoting wall frames. :D
Thanks for stopping by.. :)

[613]

Haha, yeah!
You're welcome!

[alf]

Hi. This reads so beautifully now, Love it!! alf

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks for encouraging me. :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You get a hundred points from me:) i'm not the one to tell you where did you error with the grammar... I like this piece:)

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks for taking my request. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No problem:) i'll read the others you requested, when i'll have time.

[Jeyanthi]

Okay!! officer... :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hehehe:) funny:-) i'm no officer... :P