She

She

A Poem by Jeyanthi
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Just for fun. :P

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She can talk with,
food stuffed mouth.
She offers you window seat,
even at first meet.
Always bugged by brother,
she follows same to sister,
getting slapped later.
When you get along,
compels to listen her favorite song.
She sleeps at night,
also morning same amount.
She goes to and fro between,
dramatic queen,
and Mr.Bean.

© 2015 Jeyanthi


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alf
Hi Jeyanthi. Nice to see you posting!!!! Two suggestions for this lovely poem. She listens to her favourite song and she goes to and fro between. I love this, it has a great family oriented ring to it!!!! Love that she swings between the two!!! What a fantastic image!!! just loved the read, alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

9 Years Ago

Hi, thanks for spotting the errors and correcting, i edited it... :)
alf

9 Years Ago

Cool. Such a lovely piece!!!!!! Looking for more now, alf
Jeyanthi

9 Years Ago

Thanks for encouraging.... I will try! :D



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alf
Hi Jeyanthi. Nice to see you posting!!!! Two suggestions for this lovely poem. She listens to her favourite song and she goes to and fro between. I love this, it has a great family oriented ring to it!!!! Love that she swings between the two!!! What a fantastic image!!! just loved the read, alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

9 Years Ago

Hi, thanks for spotting the errors and correcting, i edited it... :)
alf

9 Years Ago

Cool. Such a lovely piece!!!!!! Looking for more now, alf
Jeyanthi

9 Years Ago

Thanks for encouraging.... I will try! :D

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Jeyanthi

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