Innocent

Drip drop sweat after school,
the little girl takes ice water,
pours into her fish pot.

Reviews

[Saddam]

Really innocent she is. It is the time of doing some sillies act. Great little note dear poet.

[Jeyanthi]

then mom chasing with fake punishments... :D

thanks for stopping by my friend. :)

[Saddam]

Yea, but mom knows what to do.... Your most welcome.

[Sindu]

Innocent and astonishing ..

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you Sindu.. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wait...what????
innocent or psychopath?

amazing.....
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. am i too mean to you???

[Jeyanthi]

That is cruel innocence. :DDD

p.s.s yes you are mean to me, but not mean to be it. :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha.......well i was supposed to say "deal with it!!!" but you can have this one.......and you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Jeyanthi]

yeah you are more challenging. :D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

what can i say......i am challenged!!! :) :)

[Sindu]

Good to see you agreeing with your terms :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hey eavesdropper.........should i drop you somewhere.......? hell maybe?

[Sindu]

Sure as long I pay for nothing and enjoy the ride

[Jeyanthi]

meet you two there. :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! and what will we be doing then..........three of us........... ;P ;D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

probably a kavi sammelan!!! :P :P

[Jeyanthi]

then tables may fly seeing our poetic gibberish :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

don't worry i will protect both of you......just hold on tightly......!!! :P

[Sindu]

This is what it's may be called.. showing taste of hell to hellions :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha......they have this coming.......!!! :) :)