Burnt Offerings

"don't drink and sizzle!"

At a Bar-B-Q he did go,

With a Spritzer, drinking slow,

He fell over don't you know?

Now he's charcoal all a glow.

 

Reviews

[Steven Pottle]

Ha,ha,ha- that's too funny and such clever wording- great imagery Jez. And probably the first and last poem to include the word 'Spritzer'- perfect.