the cure

this poem is in honor of my dad. whom died of lung and brain cancer from agant orange in nam. and for any won else who can't find the cure

I know everyday I try to smight it I just can't fight it somedays I dream of a cure ,but one thing is for sure. I will not see the day

Reviews

[Lorraine]

I truly understand the need to channel your emotions through poetry. I've done that myself when my grandmother died. Somehow, a poem for a dead immortalizes that person in a way. I like the unpredictable style of this poem, very much like emotions are simply being thrown into words without any thought. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i'm very sorry for the loss of your father.. an emotional piece

[deeps]

Sorry for the loss, quite emotion you have penned

[The Official Gary B]

I love this dude... Great.. =) keep going! 100/100

[Coyote Poetry]

I 'm sorry for the lost of your father to agent orange. I knew many Soldiers who die from it. I was in the Army for 15 years. Poem is strong. Told of hope for a cure. Best cure in not to use agent orange. Add some period to separate statements. A very good poem. You need to remember your father.
Coyote