MEDIOCRITY IN LOVE REJECTED

''for those persons who lose their love''

          MEDIOCRITY IN LOVE REJECTED

                     Give me more love or more disdain:
                     The torrid or frozen zone
                     Being equal ease unto my pain;
                     The temperate afford me none;
                     Either extreme of love or hate
                     Is sweeter than a calm estate.

                     Give me a storm;if it be love,
                     Like Danae in the golden shower
                     I swim in pleasure;if it prove
                     Disdain,that torrent will devour
                     My vulture-hopes;and he's possessed
                     Of heaven,that's but from hell released.
                     Then crown my jaws or ease my pain;
                     Give me more love or more disdain.

Author's Note

just honest review guys:)thanks

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit I really liked this poem. Sometimes some people can try to play games and try to protect themselves by not giving themselves completely but ultimately you cant continue at type of relationship

[Jess]

thank you so much Sir Ahmad,yeah your right,,

[Frieda P]

Bingo, this is good stuff. You're going for the gusto here, give it to me all, or don't bother me with your nonchalant attitude. Good one!

[Jess]

thanks Madam F:)

[kublakhan27]

The middle ground is never any fun...honestly though, this is awesome in any poetic context :)

[Jess]

thank you:)

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[chuna]

don't be sad if you're in disdain,,,
time will come that you will be loved by your [lover] destiny,,,
keep waiting my dear,,,

good that you use new words [for me] and you made me think,,,

SHORT BUT MEANINGFUL and FULL OF EMOTIONS,,,

[Jess]

thanks dude:))yeah I keep on researching new words,and I store it in my coco brain..LOL...

[chuna]

why coco brain?

[Jess]

I knew a little:)so that's it,haha..am I belittleing myself??

[chuna]

I think its belittling,,,

[Jess]

haha....wrong spelling,,

[chuna]

at least we learn something,,

[Jess]

yeah dude,,thanks for reminding me

[chuna]

what's ^ ?

[Jess]

dude,,we have our practice in dancing,,,hurry...