MEDIOCRITY IN LOVE REJECTED

MEDIOCRITY IN LOVE REJECTED

A Poem by Jess
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''for those persons who lose their love''

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          MEDIOCRITY IN LOVE REJECTED

                     Give me more love or more disdain:
                     The torrid or frozen zone
                     Being equal ease unto my pain;
                     The temperate afford me none;
                     Either extreme of love or hate
                     Is sweeter than a calm estate.

                     Give me a storm;if it be love,
                     Like Danae in the golden shower
                     I swim in pleasure;if it prove
                     Disdain,that torrent will devour
                     My vulture-hopes;and he's possessed
                     Of heaven,that's but from hell released.
                     Then crown my jaws or ease my pain;
                     Give me more love or more disdain.

© 2013 Jess


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Jess
just honest review guys:)thanks

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I have to admit I really liked this poem. Sometimes some people can try to play games and try to protect themselves by not giving themselves completely but ultimately you cant continue at type of relationship

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jess

11 Years Ago

thank you so much Sir Ahmad,yeah your right,,
Bingo, this is good stuff. You're going for the gusto here, give it to me all, or don't bother me with your nonchalant attitude. Good one!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jess

11 Years Ago

thanks Madam F:)
The middle ground is never any fun...honestly though, this is awesome in any poetic context :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jess

11 Years Ago

thank you:)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

No problem :)
don't be sad if you're in disdain,,,
time will come that you will be loved by your [lover] destiny,,,
keep waiting my dear,,,

good that you use new words [for me] and you made me think,,,

SHORT BUT MEANINGFUL and FULL OF EMOTIONS,,,

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jess

11 Years Ago

yeah dude,,thanks for reminding me
chuna

11 Years Ago

what's ^ ?
Jess

11 Years Ago

dude,,we have our practice in dancing,,,hurry...

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Added on January 14, 2013
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Jess
Jess

Legazpi, Bicol Region, Philippines



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A Poem by Jess