God, You Know

God, You Know

A Poem by Jeremy Hiles
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I found this poem in one of my notebooks recently. I wrote it over 2 years ago, before I was into writing and didn't have much experience writing. Constructive Criticism is welcome!

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God, You know how I feel,
I want to be in the middle of Your will.
So please take my plans,
And all life's demands.
Take my burdens away,
And help me to live Your way.
Help me to stand up,
And never give up.
And when I am scared,
Help me be prepared,
To tell those who haven't heard,
About Your one true Word.

© 2015 Jeremy Hiles


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^^ Oh I like this, it is very important to ask for God's will be done and for us to be prepared and ready in order to follow through with what God leads us to do. This actually is a subject I was talking with my family this morning, that we need to stand firm in God's word and not be afraid to share and do God's will!

Great Job

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~*~Peace Keeper~*~

5 Years Ago

Yes it is very humbling! Such a great blessing as well, otherwise we would be hopelessly lost withou.. read more
Jeremy Hiles

5 Years Ago

Yes that is very true! It is a great blessing!
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

5 Years Ago

^^ Indeed!



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Really beautiful and inspiring ♡

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeremy Hiles

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Lluvs

4 Years Ago

Youre welcome (:
This is really good! Its simple and yet so thought-provoking. I really like the title too. It kinda reminds me of a prayer, one perhaps we should pray more often. Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeremy Hiles

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I almost can't believe I wrote it 2 years ago, lol! Thank you, I actually had to think .. read more
^^ Oh I like this, it is very important to ask for God's will be done and for us to be prepared and ready in order to follow through with what God leads us to do. This actually is a subject I was talking with my family this morning, that we need to stand firm in God's word and not be afraid to share and do God's will!

Great Job

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~*~Peace Keeper~*~

5 Years Ago

Yes it is very humbling! Such a great blessing as well, otherwise we would be hopelessly lost withou.. read more
Jeremy Hiles

5 Years Ago

Yes that is very true! It is a great blessing!
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

5 Years Ago

^^ Indeed!

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Added on April 11, 2015
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Jeremy Hiles
Jeremy Hiles

Kathleen, FL



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I enjoy reading and writing most all genres. I have written several short stories and am currently working on two books, as well as another story that very well could end up becoming a book too. I l.. more..

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