Cruisin' For Allusion

Cruisin' For Allusion

A Poem by jinjahman
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abstract vision of activity whilst sittin' in armchair conjur-typing

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buzzin' like
butter melting
on carpet soul - trill tail

trippin' like
a drunken hound
down on scratchpad - avenue blue

chirpin' like
a bird caged in 
calisthenic irony - beaky baby

still water
gurglin' in a fountain
somewhere over - jungle swingin'

pickin' up the pieces
fillin' out the lease of
life left on the kerb of distraction

two feet up
to the guy in the sky.
cracked nail
cruisin'
for
allusion

© 2010 jinjahman


Author's Note

jinjahman
forgive the excessive gerund with apostrophe, e.g chirpin' etc.

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Each image kind of crystallizes on its own but the it all comes together, as a wonderfully abstract whole. Good work as always.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wicked surreal dive into the psyche~thoroughly enjoyed the word play~

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a great title and a nicely written piece

Freeman

Posted 13 Years Ago


No forgiveness needed, my friend. This was a very pleasant read

Posted 13 Years Ago


loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


I see you know how to drive home with a creative license.

Posted 13 Years Ago


groovy

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool! I want what your drinking. Love this! This was my favorite stanza:chirpin' like
a bird caged in
calisthenic irony - beaky baby

I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 19, 2010
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jinjahman
jinjahman

Ireland



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I've written songs and poems since basic maturity emerged from youth. I'm driven by reminiscence and reflection, youthful endeavours and changing realities of life. I try to explore the lexicon of th.. more..

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