Wrong about life

Wrong about life

A Poem by jlh13
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this one is something i wrote after a heated argument with a group of people who claimed that i would burn in hell for beleiving something differnt then them. needless to say i was rather angry, and these feelings are reflected in the song. Side note:

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sinners, rightous

all are welcome

come one, come all

come to see the show

it's wonderful fun

for girls and boys

every one will have

the time of their life

now come, come

repent and lie

lie to save your life

and come, come

come be told...

to be told that your wrong

that what you believe is totally wrong

and that your sinners in the hands

of a god thats strong

everything you've done is wrong

throughout your life, thats been so long

that you've killed of your soul

and now its o-so-gone

fire, death

is whats in store

if you dont repent

god will close the door

your life is over

and your sinners!

now come, come

repent and lie

lie to save your life

and come, come

come be told

to be told that your wrong

that what you believe is totally wrong

and that your sinners in the hands

of a god thats strong

everything you've done is wrong

throughout your life, thats been so long

that you've killed of your soul

and now its o-so-gone

© 2008 jlh13


Author's Note

jlh13
suggestions would be wonderful, there are some parts that i feel dont flow together as well as they should...

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jlh13
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eh. not good at online profiles. but a little overview: i like hockey, i *used* to skateboard play guitar, but certain situations that i dont wanna get into prohibit me from playing as of late, and t.. more..

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