You are inside me

I tried to make a non-depressing poem. I hope you enjoy!

As I lay next to you and see your smile
I don't even care about your un-brushed teeth
I love you, just being you
While you make me orgasm, and even when you don't
Dreaming of you while being in bed with you
People said married life would suck
But it doesn't, since I am with you
You are my whole life
You caused my broken heart
However, you un-broke it
I'm infatuated by your touch
You being inside me, make me wet and moan
Using no protection because we are hoping for our first child
Adopting a puppy and buying a home
Together are love is growing stronger
I seen you grow up into a man, my man
Mentally inside my brain you control my thoughts
Love really is the best and worst pain there is
I care more about you than anything and everything
You keep me up all night by rocking me or by making me worried
Your eyes stare into my soul and I feel the goosebumps creep all over my body
I'm in love with you and you are my husband
Please, please stay in our warm bed with me
Do not leave me again for the navy, don't leave me alone, don't leave me hopelessly waiting for your love.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The story in the poem had the feel of real life. Happiness is the desire of all of us. Hard to find and very hard to hold on to. I like the ending and the logic of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Falling Leaf.]

I am a teenager.. I don't particularly enjoy anything with much sexuality, or anything relating to marriage for that matter. I don't write about it, because how can you write anything about something which you know nothing about? Marriage is a scary thing to me. Too much commitment. I've got years of freedom yet! Erotica makes me cringe. I know this isn't an erotica piece, but I still didn't enjoy it as much as I do your other works. In my opinion, an adolescent needn't be thinking about the love that is in marriage, save maybe writing about what you see between an adult couple.
Nevertheless, it was good.

[C.]

I'm too young to be able to relate to a big portion of this poem, but I really liked it though :) The last few lines were pretty sad though. My best friend for the past seven years is leaving for the navy this upcoming march. It's not quite the same thing as a husband leaving, but it still brought forward those emotions which made this more impactful for me. Anyways, good job (: keep writing