Life...yeah sure... it's great...

Life...yeah sure... it's great...

A Poem by Ashley
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I hope you enjoy, life sometimes bothers me so I needed to vent!

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Hopefully today will be another day I forget and not regret
As tears linger and thoughts ponder
I understand why people smoke cigarettes
I understand why people are bitchy
And I understand why people get brain tumors
Because life is stressful and s****y
It's annoying to be yelled at by idiotic people
Go to college just to hope to get a good paying s****y job
Pay for a house that will eventually break down in every area
Deal with family who only pretends to care for you
Have friends that no one has time for
Everyday you wake-up with a constant headache due to horrible daily events
I for one, cannot wait to move away
Hopefully I will marry someone who won't blow my heart out
Maybe something will change in a better area
Maybe things will be affordable and I don’t have to struggle each month
Maybe I wont ask myself if I want to eat or get gas for my car
Hopefully life gets better as we age

© 2012 Ashley


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"Maybe I wont ask myself if I want to eat or get gas for my car
Hopefully life gets better as we age"
I like the complete poem. The above lines are the problem for most of the people in the USA. Low pay and higher prices on everything. I understand life is hard. I believe can't get worst?? I tell the young people. Education, education and more education. The more you know. The better chance to survive. I hope all is well. I'm slowly catching up on reviews. Have fun and be safe. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

11 Years Ago

thank u!



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i also hope life gets better as we age :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Maybe I wont ask myself if I want to eat or get gas for my car
Hopefully life gets better as we age"
I like the complete poem. The above lines are the problem for most of the people in the USA. Low pay and higher prices on everything. I understand life is hard. I believe can't get worst?? I tell the young people. Education, education and more education. The more you know. The better chance to survive. I hope all is well. I'm slowly catching up on reviews. Have fun and be safe. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

11 Years Ago

thank u!
I understand why people smoke cigarettes
I understand why people are bitchy

I understand too sweetie...

Life get better as we age? HA..hate to break it to ya...it usually gets worse! Stress only multiplies as we grow old deary.

Posted 11 Years Ago


somebody has finally came back to the site. well done on this poem, classic ashley style with great imagery and wording.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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