Life...yeah sure... it's great...

Life...yeah sure... it's great...

A Poem by Ashley
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I hope you enjoy, life sometimes bothers me so I needed to vent!

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Hopefully today will be another day I forget and not regret
As tears linger and thoughts ponder
I understand why people smoke cigarettes
I understand why people are bitchy
And I understand why people get brain tumors
Because life is stressful and s****y
It's annoying to be yelled at by idiotic people
Go to college just to hope to get a good paying s****y job
Pay for a house that will eventually break down in every area
Deal with family who only pretends to care for you
Have friends that no one has time for
Everyday you wake-up with a constant headache due to horrible daily events
I for one, cannot wait to move away
Hopefully I will marry someone who won't blow my heart out
Maybe something will change in a better area
Maybe things will be affordable and I don’t have to struggle each month
Maybe I wont ask myself if I want to eat or get gas for my car
Hopefully life gets better as we age

© 2012 Ashley


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"Maybe I wont ask myself if I want to eat or get gas for my car
Hopefully life gets better as we age"
I like the complete poem. The above lines are the problem for most of the people in the USA. Low pay and higher prices on everything. I understand life is hard. I believe can't get worst?? I tell the young people. Education, education and more education. The more you know. The better chance to survive. I hope all is well. I'm slowly catching up on reviews. Have fun and be safe. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

8 Years Ago

thank u!



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i also hope life gets better as we age :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Maybe I wont ask myself if I want to eat or get gas for my car
Hopefully life gets better as we age"
I like the complete poem. The above lines are the problem for most of the people in the USA. Low pay and higher prices on everything. I understand life is hard. I believe can't get worst?? I tell the young people. Education, education and more education. The more you know. The better chance to survive. I hope all is well. I'm slowly catching up on reviews. Have fun and be safe. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

8 Years Ago

thank u!
I understand why people smoke cigarettes
I understand why people are bitchy

I understand too sweetie...

Life get better as we age? HA..hate to break it to ya...it usually gets worse! Stress only multiplies as we grow old deary.

Posted 8 Years Ago


somebody has finally came back to the site. well done on this poem, classic ashley style with great imagery and wording.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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