Ever want to die?

just a poem about a girl sad and wanting to die

I'm wondering towards another place in the brisk night
With only old dusty mirrors watching as I walk
In circles going around
I can't find my path any clearer
Not knowing where my right location is
I take some more medication
To numb my painful worries
From this dark life
Only wishing I had a sharp knife
To cut into me deep so I could see my blood
Will this feeling be permanent?
I go ahead to pop more pills
I feel the pills rushing through the core of my body
I am unable to breath
And fall down onto the muddy ground
Not hearing any sounds
I don't feel the urge to get up off of the ground
Who would really miss me if I disappear?
Since he kisses her lips and then mine
I left my heart with him
His absence was another heartbreak that won't go away
Friends and family ignore my presence 
I want to bury myself here
And leave this boring town
So I can die alone and leave old memories behind
Because I know no one will even shed a tear
Not even the ones who I truly love
Someone save me and be there to hold and,
really love me
Before I slip and fade away.

Author's Note

ignore grammar, i hope you like it!!!!!!

Reviews

[Brittany W]

This was so saddening and deep, i loved the certain parts that had the rhyming it was great. A sad tale of a depressed girl searching for someone to love her, i loved this, amazing job.

[Jeff]

Another poem straight from the heart. When that kind of pain has a hold of you it's hard to think that you'll have nothing but pain.