Ecstasy and neon lights

Ecstasy and neon lights

A Poem by Ashley
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This is just for fun only. I do not recommend taking Ecstasy. Please be mature while reading. Enjoy.

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Ecstasy makes me feel alive during the night
Popping these colorful pills helps me survive
My heart hurts
But of course it does because it's broken inside and out
These two orange and yellow pills make my pain go away
When I swallow the drugs in the club
I love to give many strangers hugs
The strong sensation of touching others
Is like feeling true happiness
Tingle through your whole mind, body, and soul
More glow sticks appear
I feel warmness rushing through the coarse of my veins
A thousand sounds of techno music gets louder by the moment
After two minutes
I'm thirsty so thirsty
My mouth is dry and feels crispy
I grab three waters to chug them down
Then I get back into the grove to dance
While following the flickering neon lights
Orange, blueberry blue, grass green, pretty purple, yellow colors
Breathing never felt so excellent. 















© 2010 Ashley


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Music can make a heart and mind content. A powerful poem of how when we mix drugs and life to open doors that are close. Only problem with alcohol and drugs. You must come down and sometime and world ain't so pretty. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Got a little dose just by reading this poem:)

Wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Music can make a heart and mind content. A powerful poem of how when we mix drugs and life to open doors that are close. Only problem with alcohol and drugs. You must come down and sometime and world ain't so pretty. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Orange, blueberry blue, grass green, pretty purple, yellow colors"
They look like little skitties! but if someone abuses them it turns ugly

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so good :)
and the picture totally describes the poem :)
Loved the last line as well :)
Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now thats a journey all who truly live have taken

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have described ecstasy use wonderfully. Very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You take us on the journey... the experience brought on by a hunger for release... Powerfully vivid, your description makes the feelings seem so real.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You must have the experience to know so much. I have seen how it works, and I will stick with my Marijuana, but a great write.

With Love,

Jaidyn

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 25, 2010
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Ashley

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