Beautiful way

Have any thoughts?

Life is a rollercoaster fulfilled with emotions
Every day there is always another problem
Every night there is always an extra tear
Want to be going towards the right path
Going crazy, hearing the clock tick away the useless minutes
I am going to start to try not to let stupid things nor people get me down
I am tired of always having a frown inside me
There’s definitely a screw loose in my mind
But at this point in my life
I'm trying not to care anymore
Life and love hurts when you care too much
I'm just rolling with the flow on everything
No more complex ways
I have to try to thinking more positively on different things
In my life I am suppose to be happy!  

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

I can really relate to your poem here. This sure seems to be how life is and the struggle to keep moving forward, trying not to let all the hard things, painful and sad things to drag us down. Focus more on the good things and doing that can be a struggle too. This is outstanding!

[Matthew Smith]

defiantly - think you meant "definitely".

Decent write. Generally relate-able.

Good job.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I really like this and can totally relate, well done :D x

[Queen of Fantasy]

Really Good Job!
Great write!