A New Love

Back on the road to finding happiness...

I never really knew the meaning of friendship...

Like a lost soul, I searched and searched.
Only to realize that friends were hard to find.
Very quickly did I learn the error of my ways.
Even now I regret my foolishness...

You could say that I was lonely.
Overly desperate to rediscover happiness.
Under the impression that I had a purpose...

Just as things seemed to be lost,
Eyes of sapphire caught my attention.
No doubt within my heart...
No doubt within my soul...
I found an angel... An angel of love.
Forever shall I stay by her side.
Even as we pass to the promised land.
Roaming together for all eternity...

Author's Note

Just a little something I thought up with heartfelt feelings... Sorry if the wording seems a little corny.

Reviews

[Annie S]

This is very well spoken i can actually hear you say it. Every stanza had an imagery of love
A very poignant write. Well done :)

[EMMIE]

Nothing corny...actually very sweet, true, and heartfelt...just spilling your emotions. Great!

[Adam :P]

good

[SyberRose]

tender and from the heart...enjoyed..SyberRose

[Rose of Gondor]

Really, really sweet, and it isn't corny at all. It's lovely. It gives a feeling of warmth and softness, and a sense of light romance. The picture is also very nice. :D Lovely piece.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nothing corny for a nice poem. If a person is in loved, all things..all words are beautiful. A poet could make them more beautiful... because you have to mix your feelings with your creativity.

[steppenwolf]

I'll add my voice and say that nothing in this poem is corny.
It's such a nice image, roaming together for all eternity.

[That_Girl]

Awwwww. :') How sweeeeeet.

[rnuff]

This is a sweet write, very well expressed.