Mutual Misunderstanding

A war of words will make things worse.

U and I

Face to face,

Standing still, staying firm

On top of each other’s own stage,

Exchanging world’s worst words in misusage.

Every exclamation is a few degrees of on-axis rotation.

Our angst reaches limit; both sinned, but neither can admit it.

For exactly a hundred and eighty degrees, we both turn,

Your eyebrows’ connection proves ireful emotion

My gritted teeth show pride you can’t beat.

Your clenched fists, my fast heartbeat;

Our anger, we really can’t keep.

Blind, we don’t mind

Back to back

U and I

Reviews

[Pax]

this was stuck on my library for a time now... and i still haven't give you my thoughts even though i had read it for quite awhile... sorry about that sir Joe... You know how i highly respect your piece and how good they are as from my mentor maam belle... :) hehe ....ok enough with the blabbering... :-D

Pride... the most common and the most hardest to avoid among the line of human nature.... anger... the most hardest to control... and when both unite in one emotional outburst... a high wall is instantly created... then we are blind, totally closed to any clear judgement... because our mind is set to one goal now... pride to protect ourselves.... anger to fight back... in everything balance for self control is the most important in dealing any problem...

this is really great sire!

[Sir Joe]

Don't be sorry about that thing. It's ok with me.
I agree with you. Pride is really a dangerous thing. It risks the lives of healthy relationships.
Thank you so much, Sir Paxie.

[Ency Bearis]

Clever and distinguishing write, a sort of concrete poem but with nice intendment and presented well. TFS.

[Sir Joe]

Thank you so much, Sir Ency. =)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

It is unique being started in U and I and ended the same :) it is brilliant Sir Joe, I am the only one was not able to write this kind of poem with shapes. heheh :) Great write, always current, relatable to lovers and couples.

[Sir Joe]

Sir Marc, thank you so much. I'm so glad I found some spare time to write a new poem.
Thanks for the comment. =)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome Sir :) it is my pleasure reading your poem.

[Sir Joe]

knowing that it is your pleasure is a great pleasure to me.

=)