Dont look down on me....

I meaningful take on the battle of class

Don’t look down at me with your fancy toilet paper
Don’t YOU look down at mw with your fancy toilet paper, OK
Just because your’s has aloe vera
Doesn’t mean your any nearer
To the real world, OK
Mine is cheap
And it chafes when I wipe
It chafes me RAW, OK
But it keeps me levelled
And it keeps me in the REAL WORLD
Do you think they have fancy toilet paper on the battlefield?
Do you think they need scented toilet paper when they take a s**t during BATTLE? NO!
Don’t look down at me with your fancy toilet paper
Just don’t look down at me with your fancy toilet paper
You spend your cash on scented tissue
But is it such an issue
How your arsehole smells
Just don’t judge me by my lower quality paper

Author's Note

I hope this lights a flame within your theological hearts

Reviews

[T. Edana Talbott]

man, do I feel you! I hate it when people think they're better than the rest of the world just because of their wealth, status or possessions. It's the heart that makes the man ( or woman). Those people and their fancy toilet paper can kiss my chafed buttox lol! Very nice write, Mr. Barret!

[Lyn Anderson]

60 views and nary a comment. Well, this one could be clever. I would suggest cleaning it up a bit, looking at the line structure to improve its rhythm, and yours should not have an apostrophe in it. And the last swear is probably unnecessary, as it doesn't add to the piece, but takes away from it -- there are many words you could use that would be more suitable.

[John Barret]

Well thank you for spending the time to reveiw, and thanks for the spell check. Now over 60 veiwa and no comments, its true! This could in some ways sadden my gentle & fragile soul, but it does not. Maybe its rubbish, not to everyones taste, maybe not highbrow enough. But true works of the soul are not made to please they are made because the artist needed to create them.