Indescribable love

John 3:16

Indescribable Love

Your love for me is hard to explain

You came down to be poor leaving a throne where you rein

What you did no one else would have done.

To redeem us it had to take God's only son.

They beat you beyond recognition.

Through it all you stayed, because it was your mission.

On your head was a thorn made crown.

The blood you shed began to run down.

Thanks to yor blood my sins are washed away.

For that I thank you day after day.

Without you, the world would surely be loss

But, you made a diffrence when you died on the cross.

To people I give them this advice.

To never forget your profound sacrifice.

Author's Note

Feel free to leave any comments on how this poem makes you feel.

Reviews

[SetApartGirl]

absolutely amazing. A very good tribute to the King. Just a few notes: one "rein" should be "reign" and the phrase "On your head was a thorn made crown" is a little awkward. maybe try something along the lines of "On your head were thorns made a crown". Again, great write!

[Simpleasures]

I am eternally grateful as well for his sacrifice. Beautiful piece you have here. Thanks for sharing.

[untoldtruth]

it makes me reconsider my opinon on Christ. You are very talented and should be proud of your writing

[SH]

beautiful poem!
This was so heart-wrenchingly sad, yet lovely.
It really makes me think of what Christ went through to save us and it was deeply moving.
Great job :)

[Cassandra D.]

It makes me think twice...