my first ever poam

this is my first ever poam, so tips are appreciated

i died you taught i was alright, you knew i had fallen for you, but still ignored me for that guy from the streets, liking all his tweets,stopping by his sheets looking all confused like his deeds saying she'd regret it like the day she met me, look at her now crying for me saying she loved me.

Author's Note

this is my first ever poem, tell me what you think, also english isn't even my main language.
tips are welcome