Letters and Numbers

Letters and Numbers

A Poem by Jonathan
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Expressing frustration at how society defines us by our grades

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Why do we strive for letters and numbers?
They are just a silent judgement,
That condemns us on that page
When we receive our verdict,
Are they satisfied now?
No, they need more.

© 2017 Jonathan


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Letters and numbers.
Hmmm...interesting piece. I think becuase this is a writers site, we all love reading about how letters are placed together to create a most extraordinary piece. For me, I have always had a fascination with words (don't know why) I find my self looking around at words everywhere I go, and words being pinned together which created a conversation can spark something off in my mind. Others do take different views, but the above is just mine.

Your piece does provoke many thoughts and yes your are right in saying that people always need more.

A good piece.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jonathan

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
matrixmark

7 Years Ago

Welcome

Mark.



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Letters and numbers.
Hmmm...interesting piece. I think becuase this is a writers site, we all love reading about how letters are placed together to create a most extraordinary piece. For me, I have always had a fascination with words (don't know why) I find my self looking around at words everywhere I go, and words being pinned together which created a conversation can spark something off in my mind. Others do take different views, but the above is just mine.

Your piece does provoke many thoughts and yes your are right in saying that people always need more.

A good piece.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jonathan

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
matrixmark

7 Years Ago

Welcome

Mark.
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Awz
I love this. Simple,short and to the point.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jonathan

7 Years Ago

Thanks. :)

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Added on April 3, 2017
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Tags: School, Education, Society

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Jonathan
Jonathan

Brighton, Sussex, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Jonathan I'm an 18 year old student and I'm starting to write poetry and I'm working on a book/short story. more..

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