True Ecstasy

Inspired by my Muse

You’ve never truly known strength,

Until the day I held you tight.

No safe haven as warm or shielding,

As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

Every detail, every inch of your fair skin,

Explored by my rough yet gentle hands.

Our bodies entwined and minds connected

New smells, new tastes, true ecstasy.

Our paths collide on a journey with the same destination,

Our hearts will lead as our bodies eagerly follow.

My gaze never breaks from yours as we reach the pinnacle,

Pulse quickens, sweat glistens, hushed screams echo.

I’ve never truly seen beauty,

Until the day I woke next to you.

Never so at peace or complete,

As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

Author's Note

Something a bit more mature but still my sappy self, hopeless romantic heh

Reviews

[True Henry]

Beautiful, in the purest sense. Your use of the 'tough guy' approach to your tone in your works only serves to touch the reader emotionally, rahter than causing them to cringe. Top marks, as always.

[That_Guy]

Thank you, I like my poems to reflect my persona and I'm glad someone is getting that

[Laura E. Aranda]

D E L I C I O U S

[That_Guy]

why thank you ;)

[Victoria Elizabeth]

awwwwwwww so cute, was that about a girl???:)

[That_Guy]

Yup ;)

[Victoria Elizabeth]

ohhhhh you cassnova!!!!! did she get to read it!!!!!!

[Kaya]

I'm not exactly a sappy romance kind of girl, but this slipped in as more sweet than anything else. I really liked it, you clearly have a lot of talent.

[That_Guy]

I'm glad you think so, thanks

[Kaylor Mason]

I can't really review this. Love is for . . . teenagers. Teenagers and . . . well, just other people . . .

[That_Guy]

meh I'm young at heart

[Ghost of Jupiter]

very sensual and sweet, wonderful write.

[That_Guy]

that's me in a nutshell heh jk. Thank you

[Ghost of Jupiter]

heheh ;)

[Bumble]

Very intimate! Your wording is wonderful and the flow is excellent.
"Our paths collide on a journey with the same destination,

Our hearts will lead as our bodies eagerly follow.

My gaze never breaks from yours as we reach the pinnacle,

Pulse quickens, sweat glistens, hushed screams echo."

Gave me chills!

[That_Guy]

Thank you I appreciate it. Awesome, I'm glad you liked it ;)

[Tatiana]

liked it lot , gave me the chills but in a good way :)

[That_Guy]

ooo i like those haha ;)

[Tatiana]

bahaha silly :)
ya gave me chills ;)

[That_Guy]

nothing wrong with being a little silly right?

[Tatiana]

lol silly is good i like silly

[That_Guy]

perfect

[Tatiana]

haha whys tht perfect ?

[That_Guy]

I enjoy being silly from time to time, if you weren't a a fan of silly I don't know what I would do

[Tatiana]

hahaha well i am n i like sillyness , i also like when people make me smile ur doin good on both :)

[That_Guy]

Now that's what I like to hear

[Tatiana]

haha ur welcome :)

[BIIKAY]

aww ! I love the line "our bodies entwined and minds connected" very AWSOME!

[That_Guy]

So do I. Thanks ;)

[natzky]

nakz....you're so good in romantic pieces huh...keep it up..:)thanks for sharing...;)

[That_Guy]

I'm glad you think so. will do ;) thank you

[natzky]

...based on experience i guess?hahah

[That_Guy]

possibly ;) haha